1. The vet was very busy with the queue coming out of the
door.
2. There was barking and screeching because of a recent cold.
3. Happily, the ladies had a conversation about their pets.
4. Some of the pets liked the vet, but some disliked him.
5. Meanwhile, the piglet who is as brown as a stick, tried
to escape from the basket.
Wow Tyler, what super sentences. You have used commas to separate the parts and I love how you began the second sentence with an adverb. Well done!
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These are great sentences Tyler and I'm wondering if you should be looking to having a go at 100WC rather than this one which os for younger children who cannot use great vocabulary like you!
ReplyDeleteReally nice descriptive words!
ReplyDeleteThis 5 sentence challenge is fantastic Tyler. You managed to squeeze in a connective, loads of great adjectives and a sentence opener into just 5 sentences. You should definitely try the 100WC as your use of vocabulary would suit it very well!
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