Friday, 4 May 2012

Ella's 100 Word Challenge

Once upon a time there was a marvellous castle surrounded by pink and purple flowers. Bees flew noisily around the beautiful roses when collecting pollen. The castle was perfect in every way even the pretty bluebirds flew around it singing their song but one day that ended it began to rain then hailstone then snow. The sky got darker and darker, the snow disappeared and furthermore the clouds got thicker. “What is happening?” asked a girl called Victoria, “Is the world going to end?”…

1 comment:

  1. Ella's mum24 May 2012 at 08:34

    Wow, go girl!!! This is fantastic. What a lot of describing words. Would love to read a little more to see what happens next. Well done!