Once upon a time there was a marvellous
castle surrounded by pink
and purple flowers. Bees flew noisily around the beautiful roses when collecting
pollen. The castle was perfect in every way even the pretty bluebirds flew
around it singing their song but one day that ended it began to rain then
hailstone then snow. The sky got darker and darker, the snow disappeared and
furthermore the clouds got thicker. “What is happening?” asked a girl called Victoria , “Is the world
going to end?”…
Wow, go girl!!! This is fantastic. What a lot of describing words. Would love to read a little more to see what happens next. Well done!
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