Friday 11 May 2012

Cara's 5 Sentence Challenge


  1. Sitting on their owners’ laps the pets lie silently waiting for the vet.
  2. As quiet as mice the owners sat with their pets.
  3. The vet was very nice and looked after the pets.
  4. The big dog had a bandage on his paw.
  5. There are lots of animals waiting for the vets.

3 comments:

  1. You have used some very good descriptive words. I wonder who the vet will so next?
    Mrs. Garcia

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  2. Hello Cara!
    I really enjoyed reading these sentences because you have thought about the picture and used some super similes.
    You are becoming a really good writer!

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  3. well done cara you have put a lot of effort into that piece of work!

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