Friday, 4 May 2012

Alfie's 100 Word Challenge

One sunny morning, far away from here, there stood a marvellous castle, with a beautiful flowing moat surrounding it. In that castle lived a wonderful princess, with a pink chihuahua that scared the neighbours out of their wits! The birds flew elegantly through the air with worms in their little orange pointy beaks. The flagpole creaked noisily as the wind blew it from side to side. The drawbridge was opening and the princess was coming out! Then she got in her horse and cart and rode into town.


  1. I found it interesting to read.

  2. Liz Goddard TEAM100WC6 May 2012 at 16:11

    Hi Alfie,
    This was a lovely gentle story that used the five given words really well. The pink chihuahua is very creative and well done for spelling such a hard word correctly!
    Keep up the good work!
    Liz Goddard (TEAM100WC)

  3. Wow Alfie.great description and lots of imaginative ideas. I'm not sure how a pink Chihuahua would scare me, but maybe next time you should use some similes.