One sunny morning, far away from here, there stood a marvellous castle, with
a beautiful flowing moat surrounding it. In that castle lived a wonderful
princess, with a pink chihuahua that scared the
neighbours out of their wits! The birds flew elegantly
through the air with worms in their little orange pointy beaks. The flagpole
creaked noisily as the wind blew it from side to
side. The drawbridge was opening and the princess was coming out! Then she got
in her horse and cart and rode into town.
I found it interesting to read.
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ReplyDeleteThis was a lovely gentle story that used the five given words really well. The pink chihuahua is very creative and well done for spelling such a hard word correctly!
Keep up the good work!
Liz Goddard (TEAM100WC)
Wow Alfie.great description and lots of imaginative ideas. I'm not sure how a pink Chihuahua would scare me, but maybe next time you should use some similes.
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