Friday, 11 May 2012

Sam F's 100 Word Challenge

Tiredly, I woke up; somehow I was in a helicopter. As slow as a slug I crept into the front seat, there was no one there. “Now what do I need to do? Steer the helicopter! AAAAARRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH!” I screamed. “Someone help me steer this thing!” Suddenly I stopped and thought for a moment. I decided it would be best if I jumped out. Luckily, I had a parachute – or did I? I was falling, I wasn’t too far from the ground and then…

1 comment:

  1. Mr Skill (Team 100WC)14 May 2012 at 19:17

    SAM, what happpened? Did you have a parachute? Did you hit the ground?

    There are so many twists and turns in these 100 words it is excellent. I am a particular fan of the range of punctuation that you have used. The only suggestion I can think of is to include some more interesting verbs, stopped doesn't really do your work justice.


    Mr Skill (Team 100WC)