Tiredly, I woke up; somehow I was in a helicopter. As slow
as a slug I crept into the front seat, there was no one there. “Now what do I
need to do? Steer the helicopter! AAAAARRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH!” I screamed.
“Someone help me steer this thing!” Suddenly I stopped and thought for a
moment. I decided it would be best if I jumped out. Luckily, I had a parachute
– or did I? I was falling, I wasn’t too far from the ground and then…
SAM, what happpened? Did you have a parachute? Did you hit the ground?
ReplyDeleteThere are so many twists and turns in these 100 words it is excellent. I am a particular fan of the range of punctuation that you have used. The only suggestion I can think of is to include some more interesting verbs, stopped doesn't really do your work justice.
Cheers
Mr Skill (Team 100WC)