Hi Beth, This is a good piece of persuasive writing with two very good reasons backing up your argument. Don't forget to write a concluding sentence where you repeat your argument. By the way, I hope you and Bella recovered quickly from your falls.
You have a good argument for a new climbing frame! I think we should show Mr Morris this. Next time, to improve your writing make sure you use capital letters and full stops.
Hi Beth,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good piece of persuasive writing with two very good reasons backing up your argument. Don't forget to write a concluding sentence where you repeat your argument. By the way, I hope you and Bella recovered quickly from your falls.
wow looks like you and Bella had a crash! I like your persuasive piece of work.
ReplyDeleteHi Beth,
ReplyDeleteYou have a good argument for a new climbing frame! I think we should show Mr Morris this. Next time, to improve your writing make sure you use capital letters and full stops.