Thursday, 24 May 2012

Beth's 100 Word Challenge


  1. Hi Beth,
    This is a good piece of persuasive writing with two very good reasons backing up your argument. Don't forget to write a concluding sentence where you repeat your argument. By the way, I hope you and Bella recovered quickly from your falls.

  2. wow looks like you and Bella had a crash! I like your persuasive piece of work.

  3. Hi Beth,

    You have a good argument for a new climbing frame! I think we should show Mr Morris this. Next time, to improve your writing make sure you use capital letters and full stops.