Hi Isabella - I comment for Team 100wc, and guess who's work I've been given to comment on this week?!
You have created a super 100wc, which I really enjoyed reading - it sounds like you had a lucky escape from the pirate (I hope he let you go!).
Also, what a good idea (well done Mr Holmes!) to use a photo of your book, so that everybody can see your super handwriting - looks to me like you're ready to start joining those letters up! Mr K :-)
Good 100wc
ReplyDeleteHi Isabella,
ReplyDeleteI am very impressed by your story, especially as I saw the date written in French. Je suppose que vous etes Francaise ou peut-etre Canadienne?
Good imagination and excellent use of punctuation.
Hope to see you back here next week
Emma
WELL done I would LOVE to live in a jelly land JC
ReplyDeleteHi Isabella - I comment for Team 100wc, and guess who's work I've been given to comment on this week?!
ReplyDeleteYou have created a super 100wc, which I really enjoyed reading - it sounds like you had a lucky escape from the pirate (I hope he let you go!).
Also, what a good idea (well done Mr Holmes!) to use a photo of your book, so that everybody can see your super handwriting - looks to me like you're ready to start joining those letters up!
Mr K :-)