Thursday, 24 May 2012

Bethan's 100 Word Challenge

Dear Mr Morris,

Please can you get rid of the bees’ nest in the park because children are not having enough exercise. Some kids are complaining because people are getting over weight and not having enough fun. Children in the younger classes are getting into trouble  because they are playing games which they think is exercise and fun but it is getting them into trouble. Some children may have allergies to bee stings and if they get stung by a bee they will have to go to hospital and they could get very ill.

3 comments:

  1. good idea we need to get rid of the bee's hive from katie e

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  2. Very good blog. What was the blog about? The bees or the kids exercise. Still that was a good blog.

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  3. Bethany, Swanmore29 May 2012 at 11:31

    Bethany in Y6H
    I like your 100 word challenge and I enjoyed reading your blog.

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