Hi Gabrielle, thank you for entering your persuasive 100wc. It was great to see why you think having a swimming pool would be so beneficial. Do make sure you are punctuating your sentences accurately and try not to start sentences with and. Keep up the super work :-) Mrs McGuinnity (Team 100wc)
Gabrielle - this is such a great piece of persuasive writing and I do hope Mr Morris agrees to your request. You have laid out some excellent reasons for having a swimming pool so I'm sure he will be persuaded!Well done!
Hi Gabrielle, thank you for entering your persuasive 100wc. It was great to see why you think having a swimming pool would be so beneficial. Do make sure you are punctuating your sentences accurately and try not to start sentences with and.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the super work :-)
Mrs McGuinnity (Team 100wc)
Gabrielle - this is such a great piece of persuasive writing and I do hope Mr Morris agrees to your request. You have laid out some excellent reasons for having a swimming pool so I'm sure he will be persuaded!Well done!
ReplyDeletehi gabs great work relly like the idia of a swimming pool.charls
ReplyDeleteI wish i had a swimming pool at swanmore primary school.
ReplyDeleteI like your piece of writing
by Alex from Swanmore