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Hi Gabrielle, thank you for entering your persuasive 100wc. It was great to see why you think having a swimming pool would be so beneficial. Do make sure you are punctuating your sentences accurately and try not to start sentences with and.Keep up the super work :-)Mrs McGuinnity (Team 100wc)
Gabrielle - this is such a great piece of persuasive writing and I do hope Mr Morris agrees to your request. You have laid out some excellent reasons for having a swimming pool so I'm sure he will be persuaded!Well done!
hi gabs great work relly like the idia of a swimming pool.charls
I wish i had a swimming pool at swanmore primary school.I like your piece of writingby Alex from Swanmore