Thursday 26 April 2012

Beth's 100 Word Challenge


8 comments:

  1. buitiful work beth alw

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  2. This is a really nice piece of Beth and a really nice picture

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  3. Wow Beth, thats a great 100 word challenge! Some great describing words like small, black, grey and gloomy. Well done!

    If you haven't used a comma maybe next time you could!

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  4. buitiful set out work Beth

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  5. Well done Beth another brilliant story love mum xx

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  6. Lovely story Beth well done love mum xx

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  7. Hi Beth

    This is a wonderful description! He sounds just like the kind of creature I would like to visit. You have really brought him to life by using some interesting vocabulary and creative details (I liked the idea of his light-bulb trunk!). I could just picture the ground shaking as he walks, and his 'grey, gloomy skin'. Well done!

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  8. i really like the simaly when he walkes the ground shakes.amazing work.

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