This is a wonderful description! He sounds just like the kind of creature I would like to visit. You have really brought him to life by using some interesting vocabulary and creative details (I liked the idea of his light-bulb trunk!). I could just picture the ground shaking as he walks, and his 'grey, gloomy skin'. Well done!
buitiful work beth alw
ReplyDeleteThis is a really nice piece of Beth and a really nice picture
ReplyDeleteWow Beth, thats a great 100 word challenge! Some great describing words like small, black, grey and gloomy. Well done!
ReplyDeleteIf you haven't used a comma maybe next time you could!
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buitiful set out work Beth
ReplyDeleteWell done Beth another brilliant story love mum xx
ReplyDeleteLovely story Beth well done love mum xx
ReplyDeleteHi Beth
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful description! He sounds just like the kind of creature I would like to visit. You have really brought him to life by using some interesting vocabulary and creative details (I liked the idea of his light-bulb trunk!). I could just picture the ground shaking as he walks, and his 'grey, gloomy skin'. Well done!
i really like the simaly when he walkes the ground shakes.amazing work.
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