Thursday, 26 April 2012

Pav's 100 Word Challenge


  1. Hello Pav,

    This is a wonderful description of an incredible animal. A cross between a falcon and a fish would be interesting, especially as you've described a very large animal. I don't think I would want it to land on my roof. :)

    You have made good use of simile in your description. Such comparisons help the reader understand your creature.

    I hope you keep entering the 100WC. Well done!

    @RossMannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher, NSW, Australia

  2. Dear Pav,
    Well done, great 100WC, love the idea of a bird crossed with a fish. A great use of similies and a amazing story to read. From alf and pat.:]

  3. Hello Pav,

    What an interesting and imaginative creature you have described for the Night Zoo Keeper. It certainly sounds huge and would probably appear fierce some, but I wonder whether it actually would be. You could very easily extend this into a longer piece of creative writing.

    Thank you for sharing your work with the 100wc.

    Mrs Shaw(Team100wc)