In the night zoo there lives a teeny teeny daddy Panda. When
it steps on the ground it sounds like a colossal earthquake. This Panda is not
any ordinary Panda, his fur is as soft as a really soft pillow and his claws
are as sharp as a really sharp blade. My Panda’s body is a snow leopard’s print
and his legs are dragon skin and his head is normal. The best thing about the
Panda is he is as cute and cuddly as a teddy bear, but he is dangerous.
Hi Bethan, your panda sounds fab! I like your use of similes, they helped to paint a very clear picture of the panda. To make your writing even better, try not to use really too often- pick a better description instead. Keep on blogging.
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