I loved you 100 wc but it might just be me you might need to use a capital letter because you have done my but you need to do My for a start of a sentences but i loved it
Well Done Gorgia, Your animal sounds like a animal I would like to meet. You have used your imaginataion to create this wonderful animal. This is great there is so much in this.
I really like how you have created a fantasy animal, you have a creative imagination. I particularly like the sentence 'Every step it takes, the ground shakes like a volcano' Well done. Keep up the good work!
Hello Georgia, brilliant work there. I can tell you really enjoyed doing that 100 word challenge. I love your picture of your animal. Your handwriting is so neat. Well done! ~ Chloe.
Hello Geogia
ReplyDeleteI loved you 100 wc but it might just be me you might need to use a capital letter because you have done my but you need to do My for a start of a sentences but i loved it
Well Done Gorgia,
ReplyDeleteYour animal sounds like a animal I would like to meet. You have used your imaginataion to create this wonderful animal. This is great there is so much in this.
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I really like how you have created a fantasy animal, you have a creative imagination. I particularly like the sentence 'Every step it takes, the ground shakes like a volcano'
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Keep up the good work!
amazing work georgia the animal sounds very very scary i would hate to have him as a pet :
ReplyDeleteHello Georgia,
ReplyDeletebrilliant work there. I can tell you really enjoyed doing that 100 word challenge. I love your picture of your animal. Your handwriting is so neat.
Well done!
~ Chloe.