Thursday 26 April 2012

Albena's 100 Word Challenge


My animal has a body of mouse but the size of a giraffe, his temper is very aggressive. He lives in a muddy and filthy pond with slimy and sticky seaweed. It walks like a waddling duck with every step of his way the ground shivers like an earthquake. At the end of his nose he has a horn as silky as feathers and as sharp as daggers. He always charges after his horn he runs as fast as a cheetah and has big red blurry eyes the size of balls. So do not go near my animal because he’ll run over you.

2 comments:

  1. Elise and jack (Greenfields)27 April 2012 at 14:32

    Well done Albena you used lots of good description and lots of punctuation I thought it was very good I liked the part where you put the ground shivers like an earthquake maybe you could describe where it lives for example in a forest.

    from elise and jack

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  2. Albena, this is a really rich description, and very engaging, well done! Could you rephrase your opening slightly: "My animal has the body of a mouse"?

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