Thursday 4 October 2012

Nathan A's 5 Sentence Challenge

The sky was black. It poured down with big drops of rain. Two tornadoes came crashing down near the river and the water flew up in mid air. There was a huge flash of lightening and it executed all of the trees. The lightening lit up the world.

6 comments:

  1. GRATE WORK I LIKE THE DESCRIBING WORDS

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  2. Bethany Old Hammondtown5 October 2012 at 14:22

    Ben that really great I especially like the last sentence.

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  3. WOW Ben you have used some amazing vocabulary in your writing :-).
    I especially liked the part about the lightning executing the trees - very strong imagery (which means that you have made it easy for me to see the picture of the trees being executed in my head).
    Thank you :-)
    MrsP (Team 5scc)

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  4. Wel done Nathan, I love the sentence,
    'There was a huge flash of lightening and it executed all of the trees.'
    Amazing work, keep it up! :)

    From ypur friends at www.6d2012.highlawnprimary.net

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  5. nice opening Nathan! This morning we were working on our openers.Will you ever do another 5 sentence challenge?
    Was it fun?

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  6. WOW nathan I really like your story .I really really liked your discribing words. good job.wellllllllllllllllllllllllllll donnnnnnnnne.

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