Thursday, 4 October 2012

Lauren's 100 Word Challenge

There is was standing on the podium giving me a snarling look in the eye. A big frozen alien. It had been there for hundreds of years. I decided to walk away because it was boring! Suddenly, something grabbed me. It turned me around. I was face to face with the alien. My heart was pumping like a needle, pumping into someone's arm one hundred times. I could see the look in his eyes, he was about to drop me. He did! I was falling from a great height, through the sky. I didn't know what to do...


  1. Ali (Old Hammondtown School)5 October 2012 at 14:43

    I love your story! I enjoyed reading it every much.

  2. Hi
    Great story my favourite bit was when the alien grabbed you. I really liked the frozen alien it sounded a bit like a massive lollipop

  3. Hi Lauen
    What a great entry for this weeks 100WC. You have thought about the prompt and created a really good story using interesting vocabulary and a fast pacing theme. Well done.
    Mrs Robinson 100WC Team

  4. This is a very interesting story and I would like to read a lot more from you.
    Well done, keep on writing.

  5. I like the way that you have thought about how to get the reader to understand how you are feeling when the alien grabs you. Well done.

  6. I like where the alien grabed you.