Thursday, 4 October 2012

Adam's 5 Sentence Challenge

The sky was black and it was pouring with rain. There was thunder smashing and I was cold. Everything was flooded, the river was high and the drains were overflowing. Then suddenly, "BANG," a huge flash of lightening went through the sky.
"BOOM!" Thunder echoed in the sky.


  1. Heather Old Hammondtown School5 October 2012 at 14:29

    That reminds me of what is happening in New Orlens, Louisianna.

  2. Hello Adam,
    You have used some terrific words to show how wild the weather was - "pouring" and "smashing" and "overflowing" really help to show what was happening. Your sentences are very descriptive and make me feel like I am there in the storm too!
    MrsP (Team 5scc)