In England, there were floods and the sky was black. There was heavy rain, the brooks and rivers were flooded. The drains were overflowing. My garden was all wet, lots of slugs were out. The rain came clattering down on the conservatory.
Hi Ben, Your writing is very descriptive and I think that your use of different lengths of sentences has made your work interesting to read. You have added information to your sentences to make them more complex and interesting. Great job - do you like catching slugs? MrsP (Team 5scc)
Hi Ben,
ReplyDeleteYour writing is very descriptive and I think that your use of different lengths of sentences has made your work interesting to read. You have added information to your sentences to make them more complex and interesting.
Great job - do you like catching slugs?
MrsP (Team 5scc)