One morning I was watching 'The Rat Movie 2.' It was voted outstanding by the public. Ok, really I was the only person in town who had even bought the movie, let alone watch it!
The next day, I went to the park with my friends Chloe and Ebony. Our house is behind a dark, cold, black scrapyard. So, we went to the park around the corner to play football. A second later there was a loud and scary bang coming from behind me. An eagle flew across the sky. Everything went quiet and the sky turned black. Suddenly I felt like I was falling! I was! The giant rat had grabbed me...
wow i like the part about when you said it was a good rated film but you was the only one to buy it i think your story was really cool i couldnt take my eyes of it.From Jamie
ReplyDeleteWell done Amelia. That sounds like an interesting story!
ReplyDelete'hi i like your work because you were the only one to buy the giant rat film''hi i like your book'
ReplyDeletehi amelia
ReplyDeletei love your story is there a reale rat move 2 i fink when you are older you will be a graet writer you have used graet words in it