Sunday, 7 October 2012

Amelia's 100 Word Challenge

One morning I was watching 'The Rat Movie 2.' It was voted outstanding by the public. Ok, really I was the only person in  town who had even bought the movie, let alone watch it!

The next day, I went to the park with my friends Chloe and Ebony. Our house is behind a dark, cold, black scrapyard. So, we went to the park around the corner to play football. A second later there was a loud and scary bang coming from behind me. An eagle flew across the sky. Everything went quiet and the sky turned black. Suddenly I felt like I was falling! I was! The giant rat had grabbed me...


  1. wow i like the part about when you said it was a good rated film but you was the only one to buy it i think your story was really cool i couldnt take my eyes of it.From Jamie

  2. Well done Amelia. That sounds like an interesting story!

  3. jamie and connor10 October 2012 at 17:43

    'hi i like your work because you were the only one to buy the giant rat film''hi i like your book'

  4. hi amelia
    i love your story is there a reale rat move 2 i fink when you are older you will be a graet writer you have used graet words in it