The sky was black. It poured down with big drops of rain. Two tornadoes came crashing down near the river and the water flew up in mid air. There was a huge flash of lightening and it executed all of the trees. The lightening lit up the world.
WOW Ben you have used some amazing vocabulary in your writing :-). I especially liked the part about the lightning executing the trees - very strong imagery (which means that you have made it easy for me to see the picture of the trees being executed in my head). Thank you :-) MrsP (Team 5scc)
GRATE WORK I LIKE THE DESCRIBING WORDS
ReplyDeleteBen that really great I especially like the last sentence.
ReplyDeleteWOW Ben you have used some amazing vocabulary in your writing :-).
ReplyDeleteI especially liked the part about the lightning executing the trees - very strong imagery (which means that you have made it easy for me to see the picture of the trees being executed in my head).
Thank you :-)
MrsP (Team 5scc)
Wel done Nathan, I love the sentence,
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Amazing work, keep it up! :)
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nice opening Nathan! This morning we were working on our openers.Will you ever do another 5 sentence challenge?
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WOW nathan I really like your story .I really really liked your discribing words. good job.wellllllllllllllllllllllllllll donnnnnnnnne.
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