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GRATE WORK I LIKE THE DESCRIBING WORDS
Ben that really great I especially like the last sentence.
WOW Ben you have used some amazing vocabulary in your writing :-).I especially liked the part about the lightning executing the trees - very strong imagery (which means that you have made it easy for me to see the picture of the trees being executed in my head).Thank you :-)MrsP (Team 5scc)
Wel done Nathan, I love the sentence, 'There was a huge flash of lightening and it executed all of the trees.'Amazing work, keep it up! :)From ypur friends at www.6d2012.highlawnprimary.net
nice opening Nathan! This morning we were working on our openers.Will you ever do another 5 sentence challenge?Was it fun?
WOW nathan I really like your story .I really really liked your discribing words. good job.wellllllllllllllllllllllllllll donnnnnnnnne.