Monday 15 October 2012

Lucas' Imaginary World Story



6 comments:

  1. Zoe OldHamondtown15 October 2012 at 14:01

    Wow I love the detail you put in the story!

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  2. Davy Old Hammondtown School15 October 2012 at 14:04

    I liked your story. You used many good adjectives.

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    1. Johnny Old Hammond Town15 October 2012 at 14:10

      Did the class have to write about the same topic?

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  3. Hi its Phoebe from the Norman school I loved your piece of writing, and I bet your good at writing other stories aswell.

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  4. We have yse the sam story but we did t dou biy nouw

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  5. We have yse the sam story but we did t dou biy nouw

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