Monday 15 October 2012

Ben's Imaginary World Story



Posted by at 12:29

14 comments:

  1. Mr Bowles15 October 2012 at 13:31

    Ben, This story was exciting. Phoebe Madrid.
    Good adjectives. Harrison Madrid.
    I really enjoyed this story. Dylan Madrid.

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  2. Davy Old Hammondtown School15 October 2012 at 14:00

    Nice story, I liked the resolution.

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  3. Zoe OldHamondtown15 October 2012 at 14:02

    Nice pictures you are some great artists!

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    1. Nick Old Hammondtown School15 October 2012 at 14:10

      I really like your story.Where did you get your idea from?

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    2. w17 October 2012 at 14:15

      How did you decide on your subject?

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  4. Heather Old Hammondtown School15 October 2012 at 14:06

    What was your story about? I could not understand it. I love your drawing!

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  5. Phoebe Madrid15 October 2012 at 14:59

    Hi its Phoebe from the Norman school I love wolfs and wild animals like foxes, but theas pictures are great you will become a great artist.

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    1. Blake Old Hammondtown School17 October 2012 at 14:11

      I really liked that story.

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    2. Bethany Old Hammondtown17 October 2012 at 14:15

      Hi Ben I really like your picture.

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  6. alfie16 October 2012 at 14:33

    i love your pictures ben they are relly efective.

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  7. Brandon - Old Hammondtown School17 October 2012 at 14:11

    I really liked your wick story.

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  8. Ben17 October 2012 at 16:51

    Brilliant story Ben!

    From Ben's Mum:)

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  9. Ben17 October 2012 at 16:54

    briliant story:)

    From jj

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  10. Eleanor17 October 2012 at 17:50

    Wow Ben that is a good piece of writting and there is some good adjectives aswell keep it up there is some good pictures they are realy efective

    By Eleanor

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