It was a normal day and I was playing football in my garden with my mates, when one of them kicked the ball into a hedge and wouldn't go and get it. I decided that I would get it, so I carefully pushed open the hedge and to my surprise about fifty white spiders came scurrying out of the hedge. Some of my mates ran away, but others stayed to get a closer look at the creatures. I stepped closer to touch one of them, but it bit me and the rest showed their teeth, so we all ran away!
By Ollie
Well done Ollie on this week 100WC.
ReplyDeleteI too am frightened of spiders so I would have run away with your mates!I like how you described how the spiders came running out of the hedge, 'scurrying' is the ideal adjective in this situation. Try using a mixture of'ing' and 'ly' word to open your sentences. Keep entering the 100WC.