Sunday, 18 March 2012

Ollie's 100 Word Challenge

It was a normal day and I was playing football in my garden with my mates, when one of them kicked the ball into a hedge and wouldn't go and get it. I decided that I would get it, so I carefully pushed open the hedge and to my surprise about fifty white spiders came scurrying out of the hedge. Some of my mates ran away, but others stayed to get a closer look at the creatures. I stepped closer to touch one of them, but it bit me and the rest showed their teeth, so we all ran away!

By Ollie

1 comment:

  1. Sara Green Team 100WC19 March 2012 at 22:19

    Well done Ollie on this week 100WC.
    I too am frightened of spiders so I would have run away with your mates!I like how you described how the spiders came running out of the hedge, 'scurrying' is the ideal adjective in this situation. Try using a mixture of'ing' and 'ly' word to open your sentences. Keep entering the 100WC.