Sunday, 18 March 2012

Albena's 100 Word Challenge

I was carefully creeping along the grass when I suddenly saw fifty white spiders. I was so shocked that I turned pale white! Suddenly, I felt my hand touch the spider. I pushed it so hard that it fell off the branch it was clinging on to. The other spiders looked at me with beady eyes and came charging towards me. I started to walk backwards, but then I realised that they were poisonous, so I started to run as fast as I could. The spiders were too fast for me and they caught me up. I screamed as loud as I could, but ...

By Albena


  1. wow this is a GREAT story/100 word challenge

  2. well done albena you have done really well
    from katie o

  3. wow great story Albena i like the beginning 'I was carefully creeping along the grass

  4. I like how you put words like beady and how you ended it . it really made me read it I even got mum to read it.from charlie

  5. hi albena,
    I love your 100 wc story.You have used alot of good words like beady and I love the start I was carefully creeping along the grass!! it was amazing. keep it up.
    happy blogging!
    sasha (maple class)

  6. wow Albena great story