Friday, 9 March 2012

Callum's 5 Sentence Challenge

In the summer the flowers will grow beautifully.
The sun was beaming on the plants.
The bees were buzzing loudly.
The birds were singing nicely while sat on the branches of the trees.
I like to play in my garden with all of my friends.

By Callum - Poplar


  1. well done cal from ollie

  2. This is super work Callum. Your sentences create a clear picture of the garden and the words you have used describe well the sounds you can hear.