Thursday 20 September 2012

Mia's 5 Sentence Challenge

There are horse and carriages standing in the hot sun. Lovely purple and pink blossom is on the trees. Ladies are dressed in lovely white, blue and pink dresses. Horses are waiting in the sun to take people for rides. White fluffy clouds are in the blue sky.

13 comments:

  1. Good work mia very good

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  2. Hi mia, Ireally like your work. You should be given 100 house points.

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  3. well done mia keep the hard work up

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  4. Great work Mia i wish i can make sentences like yours

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  5. Nice work Mia good remarry capiter letter.

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  6. well done .you had lot of ful stops .I like your ajektiv

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  7. Well done, keep up the good work!

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  9. Well done Mia, I really like your adjectives.

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  10. hi mia your worck is good because you have used lots of adjectives.

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  11. Fantastic work Mia. Keep it up.
    Miss Prophet (mum)

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  12. Well done great job see you on wednesday

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