Thursday 20 September 2012

Charlie H 5 Sentence Challenge

It is spring because there is blossom on the trees. The band is playing a tune. Is very warm, the ladies have got parasols. People are happily riding the horse and carriage in the park. Everyone is wearing old clothes.

22 comments:

  1. hi charlie good work its really nice goodbye
    jamie

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  2. well done charlie good sentence ben

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  3. well done charlie great work :)

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  4. Hi Chariel i love your 5 sentences

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  5. FANTASTIC WORK CHARLIE KEEP IT UP LAUREN

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  6. Hi charlie good describing words and good punchuation as well Eleanor...

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  7. well don i like your story

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  8. Really good charlie good discribing words

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  9. wel don is relly good

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  10. good wrok and nice wrok.

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    1. I LIKE YOUR SENTENCE AND GOOD describing words charlie well done

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  11. hi charlie wow you have used great ajetivies I realy like your work

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  12. nice work is realy good

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  13. Hi Charlie great work

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  14. well done good work chalie

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  15. hi charlie great sentences its great bye

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  16. Well done Charlie that work is great

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  17. well done .it is fab.

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  18. wow i wish i was you becuse that was briliant mia welldone keep up the good work .was that hard work.

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  19. bonjaur charlie au revoir.

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  20. Good sentences and interesting adjectives! Top writing!

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  21. i like your semtence they are vrey good describing word charlie and nice writing well done!

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