Thursday, 20 September 2012

Adam's 5 Sentence Challenge

There are people walking around trying to find a picnic space to eat. There are children playing in the fountain with boats, while grown ups set up the picnic ready to eat. The sun is shining really brightly. There is pink blossom on the trees. Plants have been planted in the bone dry soil.

13 comments:

  1. Hi Adam, super sentences! Mrs P was really impressed with your effort. Keep up the good work!

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  2. well done adam great work :)

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  3. good wock adom keep up

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  4. good work and great adgectives.

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  5. hi Adam good work keep it up.

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  6. good work adom keep up

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  7. Hi charlie I like. Your. Work. Nathan

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  8. Welldone Adam great words keep up the good work

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