(Typed by Christian)
One day my dad took me and Nathan fishing. I cast it in, but the person next to us caught a whopper of a fish. It tried attacking us but bob, the person next to us
Whacked it with his fishing rod, it fell back in . Me and Nathan, Bob and dad went
snorkelling and saw lots of fish, but not the one bob caught. Then bob saw a cave with lots of whopper fish then we saw the queen alien fish. "swim ahhhhhhhhhh"
Millions of fish they chased us for hours, would the fish ever give up......
The light was so bright, the sun was beaming over my head,
the white clouds were as silky as a sheet that billows out and floats for
miles. The ponds looked like milk ponds, it was lovely and warm. It was a place
so nice, that not a living soul would step out of this place. At night time,
stars and crystals glowed in the distance.
At day time a beautiful summer breeze blew on my relaxed skin…This
mysterious place is like heaven .The sky was a beautiful blue, cloudless and
lovely. Everyday you could relax and do what you want. This place was ……..
What do you think the compulsory words were?
Cerys has hidden the 5 words in her 100 word challenge- which are they?
Today is the first day back. “Hi Amy!” I shouted. “Hi Mia!” Amy
replied. Yes I’m sitting by Amy .Tom doesn’t look happy. “No it’s Marcus!”. Mr
Fullerman saw Tom on his DS.”Give me that!”, he said aggressively. Tom handed
it over. After 30 minutes of Maths it was break, Tom told me and Amy his plan
to get his DS back.
At 10 o’clock, me Amy and Tom sneaked in the class room: “Hello??!”
said Mr Fullerman, scared. Tom and Amy hid. Mr Fullerman had a beaming light
that was so bright! It shone in the classroom. Tom grabbed the DS and ran out
of school. “Mr Fullerman was going to be angry, but it was so much fun!”. In
the morning we went in the class, Mr Fullerman was red-faced when he saw Tom with
his DS: “NOOOO!!”, the class shouted.
Leave Mia a comment below, what has she done well in her writing?
Great
Monday… At 9:00 am mum’s woken me up, the light was so bright it almost blew my
eyeballs out! I tried to adjust to the light, (finally after a minute I did).
Now you would expect me to be late for school, well you’re right because after
talked with Derek (my best mate) about Dogzombies and ate a biscuit, mum shouts
“you’re late for school again’’ I save time by just using mouthwash, and not
brushing my hair and not kissing mum goodbye (too old for that really). There we
go morning routine, Tom Gates style. In class Marcus Meldrew looks a bit more
smug than usual, there’s something which is not right.
Joe has written in the style of L.Pichon, what type of writing is it?
Leave Joe a comment- he can't wait to hear what you think!
This week in Science we are focusing on changing states, particularly melting ice!
This game will help you remember the facts we are learning! Good luck!
It was a stormy night ,I was walking through the park until a few birds swooped down and I got caught round the hands. They took me away to their nest. I was scrambling to break free but the birds were to strong, so that meant I have to break free at the nest or were they rest. I was screaming for help but no one heard me but then I saw someone running , it looked like he wanted to help me. Then suddenly there was a giant knife came straight at me, all the birds scattered then I fell straight down, the man caught me and the he took me away..... The birds were waiting for there next victim......... DUM! DUM! DUM!
Alfie thinks the birds and the man where working together as a gruesome team! What do you think?