Joe’s 100 word challenge!
(Typed by Joe)
Great
Monday… At 9:00 am mum’s woken me up, the light was so bright it almost blew my
eyeballs out! I tried to adjust to the light, (finally after a minute I did).
Now you would expect me to be late for school, well you’re right because after
talked with Derek (my best mate) about Dogzombies and ate a biscuit, mum shouts
“you’re late for school again’’ I save time by just using mouthwash, and not
brushing my hair and not kissing mum goodbye (too old for that really). There we
go morning routine, Tom Gates style. In class Marcus Meldrew looks a bit more
smug than usual, there’s something which is not right.
Joe has written in the style of L.Pichon, what type of writing is it?
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I have not met a Dogzombie (I'm pleased about that!) but I loved your story Joe. I especially liked "it almost blew my eyeballs out". You leave the reader wanting more. Well done.
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