Monday, 1 July 2013

Our class book 'Tom Gates' features in our 100 Word challenges!

Joe’s 100 word challenge!
(Typed by Joe)

Great Monday… At 9:00 am mum’s woken me up, the light was so bright it almost blew my eyeballs out! I tried to adjust to the light, (finally after a minute I did). Now you would expect me to be late for school, well you’re right because after talked with Derek (my best mate) about Dogzombies and ate a biscuit, mum shouts “you’re late for school again’’ I save time by just using mouthwash, and not brushing my hair and not kissing mum goodbye (too old for that really). There we go morning routine, Tom Gates style. In class Marcus Meldrew looks a bit more smug than usual, there’s something which is not right.

Joe has written in the style of L.Pichon, what type of writing is it?
Leave Joe a comment- he can't wait to hear what you think!

1 comment:

  1. I have not met a Dogzombie (I'm pleased about that!) but I loved your story Joe. I especially liked "it almost blew my eyeballs out". You leave the reader wanting more. Well done.