On November the 5
there was an adventure like never before. Two kids had the time of their life
this is where are story begins. Suddenly there was a scream then it all went
silent until... The door handle slowly started to turn then a head popped out.
It was a child
‘phew’. And then
another head popped out the door it was his brother then the dad of Aaron and
Ethan. He came out and said ‘I`m going to work stay out of trouble,’ he
shouted. Then the two brothers went back inside there was a smash…Then Aaron
screamed again. But this time he was in the…ATTIC suddenly there was a tickle
down his back, a spider was slowly creeping up his back. He thought to himself
and then whispered ”But I thought I had enough time” .The spider started his
meal he first bit into his neck and
started feasting on his…BLOOD AND BONES.
Brilliant story and great descriptions :-)
ReplyDeleteWOW Lottie that sounds even beter than before because I was siting next to you and I read it a cuple of times this is the best won so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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