‘The masked
crook made a run for it’, the police alarmed. I kept running and running till I
was out of breath but then I saw it ,the last chocolate egg, I grabbed it as
quick as I could , but wait there’s a note on it , its said’ ‘hello earthling
from a planet no other eat me quick don’t do a runner’.
I thought,
should I or not, it felt like thought were coming out of my head, well the word
not popped out of my nose, but anyway I couldn’t decide so I flicked coin,
heads I grab, tales I don’t, I flicked it high in the sky and its head, ‘yes’ I
screamed, so I crept over and snatched it but then it, it
AAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRHHHHHHHHHHHH
I screeched ,
they tricked me and put me in a scary, dark room and tied me to a chair also
they asked me loads of questions till I confessed but they new they would never
get it out of me, WWAHHHAHAHAHARRR , I’m one naughty
Bunny!
By Ella
WELL DONE Ella I really like that story but maybe on the AAAARRRRRRRRRRRHHHHHHHHHHHHH bit mabe add some of these "....."?
ReplyDeletewow Ella brilliant! great describing words
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