Monday 3 February 2014

Joes 100 word challenge!

(Typed by Joe)

A letter came through the door. Edwena opened the letter and a fateful frown came on her face. A tear trickled down her cheek as she read and read. The one tear multiplied and she began to cry. Killed in action it read. How could she tell her children.6 months later they were going for a walk. Far off on the other side of the field she saw a blurred figure “Henry?” she whispered. She walked toward the man. Then a run. Then a sprint “dada” shouted the boy “kids, Edwena your home your home Henry
Please let Joe know what you think!

17 comments:

  1. I think it builds up a lot of tension, Well done Joe!

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  2. BRILLIANT STORY JOE !!!!!!!:)

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  3. there is only 97 words! but it is still great!

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  4. 100 words! Wow, you did a good job! That's a lot of words.

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  5. I bet you had to think of all those words.

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  6. I like your story is that really 100 words? Good job.

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  7. 100 words! How long did it take you. Maybe you should try 300 words.

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  8. I love your 100 word challenge. That's a lot of words.

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  9. Good job! 100 words wow is your dad in the army?

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  10. I like how you did a hundred words good work.

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  11. LukeZ st.john Vinanney19 March 2014 at 14:25

    100 words that's a lot of work good job !!!!

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  12. Wow you have a really good story. You also used 100 WORDS.

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  13. GREAT STORY JOE

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  14. I am lost for words that is so good

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