Monday 13 May 2013

Imagine you wake up and this is what happens......


Please enjoy this creative writing about a plane crash typed by Adam and William. 

I opened my eyes and dark back smoke surrounding barley visible was the burnt out wreckage of the bunt out plane. I saw boiling hot chunks of metal flying like rockets into the air, all I could smell where fumes from the fuel making it hard to breath I could almost taste the fuel I could here other passengers screaming for help. I tried to crawl but I was frozen with fear I could feel blood down my leg I needed to get out from the danger but should I try north or east? 

Slowly I found the strength to crawl out and carry on carefully trying to dodge the hot metal raining down a screaming passenger held out his hand pleading for help. I managed to move a gigantic piece of  the  planes  wing  trapping  his leg. It took  all  my  strength  and I had to ignore  my  own  pain.

Suddenly I heard a rustling in the trees and the deafening sirens  from the rescue   boat. A man  appeared out  of the  smoke  with  rescue equipment  relief  washed  over  me. I  knew I was  saved I was ready  to  follow  a new  direction. The  pain in my leg so bad I could  feel  consciousness  slipping  away  again.

What could happen next?
You decide! 
Leave us a comment with your ideas! 

6 comments:

  1. Very mysterious!!

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  2. molly Palin poplar13 May 2013 at 18:54

    hi i like all your adjectives my favourite sentence is i opened my eyes and dark back smoke surrounding barley visible was the burnt out wreckage of the burnt out plane.

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  3. i love it really descriptive you have thought really hard about this i know you worked on this in a group so well done the people that was in your group

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  4. WOW what does happen Adam and Will tell me tell me now ?

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  5. poppi from poplar16 May 2013 at 17:41

    i want to reed more it is amasing

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