Please enjoy this creative writing about a plane crash typed by Adam and William. 
I opened my eyes and dark back smoke
surrounding barley visible was the burnt out wreckage of the bunt out plane. I
saw boiling hot chunks of metal flying like rockets into the air, all I could
smell where fumes from the fuel making it hard to breath I could almost taste
the fuel I could here other passengers screaming for help. I tried to crawl but
I was frozen with fear I could feel blood down my leg I needed to get out from
the danger but should I try north or east? 
Slowly I found the strength to crawl out
and carry on carefully trying to dodge the hot metal raining down a screaming
passenger held out his hand pleading for help.  I managed to move a gigantic piece of  the 
planes  wing  trapping 
his leg. It took  all 
my  strength  and I had to ignore  my 
own  pain.
Suddenly I heard a rustling in the
trees and the deafening sirens  from the
rescue   boat. A man  appeared out  of the 
smoke  with  rescue equipment  relief 
washed  over  me. I 
knew I was  saved I was ready  to 
follow  a new  direction. The  pain in my leg so bad I could  feel 
consciousness  slipping  away  again.
What could happen next?
You decide! 
Leave us a comment with your ideas! 
Very mysterious!!
ReplyDeletehi i like all your adjectives my favourite sentence is i opened my eyes and dark back smoke surrounding barley visible was the burnt out wreckage of the burnt out plane.
ReplyDeletei wander
ReplyDeletei love it really descriptive you have thought really hard about this i know you worked on this in a group so well done the people that was in your group
ReplyDeleteWOW what does happen Adam and Will tell me tell me now ?
ReplyDeletei want to reed more it is amasing
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