Please enjoy this creative writing about a plane crash typed by Adam and William.
I opened my eyes and dark back smoke
surrounding barley visible was the burnt out wreckage of the bunt out plane. I
saw boiling hot chunks of metal flying like rockets into the air, all I could
smell where fumes from the fuel making it hard to breath I could almost taste
the fuel I could here other passengers screaming for help. I tried to crawl but
I was frozen with fear I could feel blood down my leg I needed to get out from
the danger but should I try north or east?
Slowly I found the strength to crawl out
and carry on carefully trying to dodge the hot metal raining down a screaming
passenger held out his hand pleading for help. I managed to move a gigantic piece of the
planes wing trapping
his leg. It took all
my strength and I had to ignore my
own pain.
Suddenly I heard a rustling in the
trees and the deafening sirens from the
rescue boat. A man appeared out of the
smoke with rescue equipment relief
washed over me. I
knew I was saved I was ready to
follow a new direction. The pain in my leg so bad I could feel
consciousness slipping away again.
What could happen next?
You decide!
Leave us a comment with your ideas!
Very mysterious!!
ReplyDeletehi i like all your adjectives my favourite sentence is i opened my eyes and dark back smoke surrounding barley visible was the burnt out wreckage of the burnt out plane.
ReplyDeletei wander
ReplyDeletei love it really descriptive you have thought really hard about this i know you worked on this in a group so well done the people that was in your group
ReplyDeleteWOW what does happen Adam and Will tell me tell me now ?
ReplyDeletei want to reed more it is amasing
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