Tuesday, 22 October 2013

Dive into Liam's Imaginary world!

(Typed by Liam) Remember to leave him a comment!

As I slowly came out the other side of the wardrobe I looked at the land in front of
Me , I could see the land as far as the eye could see .Strangly though a lamppost stood right in front of me.The white-ish light stood shimmering in front of me , at the very edge where I could see CairParavel. The hills were blush with soft green grass. Flocks of soft white sheep grazed freely on the fields .The snow crunched under my feet when I walked on it .As I took a few more steps forward a strange figure emerged from the distance…………………The figure came in front of me  ,the person spoke really weirdly . He ran off when he saw me .When he had left I could smell the wet trees it must have rained yesterday or last week suddenly it started snowing , some of it fell into my mouth , it was very plain. I could hear the wind rustling in the trees .The trees felt all flaky. I thought this world wasn’t real. 


  1. great description Liam

  2. Well done Liam that was outstan

  3. lucy(in hond kong)12 November 2013 at 12:23

    really good Liam

  4. well done Liam ace wardrobe story !!

    1. Thank you for your comments on my work