Monday 30 September 2013

Christian's fishy 100 Word challenge!

(Typed by Christian) One day my dad took me and Nathan fishing. I cast it in, but the person next to us caught a whopper of a fish. It tried attacking us but bob, the person next to us Whacked it with his fishing rod, it fell back in . Me and Nathan, Bob and dad went snorkelling and saw lots of fish, but not the one bob caught. Then bob saw a cave with lots of whopper fish then we saw the queen alien fish. "swim ahhhhhhhhhh" Millions of fish they chased us for hours, would the fish ever give up......
Posted by at 12:25

6 comments:

  1. Abi from Ash class4 October 2013 at 17:30

    Thats a brilliant 100 word challenge. Just try not to put capital letters in the middle of a sentence.

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  2. liam4 October 2013 at 18:07

    wow!!!!!!! Christian I really want to know what happened next.

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  3. binners15 October 2013 at 20:03

    Epic 100 word challenge Christian !!! from Max

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  4. Christians dad5 November 2013 at 18:37

    Top adventure Tinks !!!















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  5. Maliha24 January 2014 at 11:14

    very entertaining

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  6. CharlotteSt.JohnVianney19 March 2014 at 14:18

    I really like your story. It was very exciting!

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