Thursday 13 June 2013

Enjoy Alfie's 100 word challenge!



It was a stormy night ,I was walking through the park until a few birds swooped down and I got caught round the hands. They took me away to their nest. I was scrambling to break free but the birds were to strong, so that meant I have to break free at the nest or were they rest. I was screaming for help but no one heard me but then I saw someone running , it looked like he wanted to help me. Then suddenly there was a giant knife came straight at me, all the birds scattered then I fell straight down, the man caught me and the he took me away..... The birds were waiting for there next victim......... DUM! DUM! DUM!

Alfie thinks the birds and the man where working together as a gruesome team! What do you think?

5 comments:

  1. What happened next Alfie?

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  2. fantastic! what will happen next

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  3. i think that your one hundred word challenge is great it leaves you wondering what is going to happen next great story alfie!!!

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  4. Love the story Alfie! Well done. x

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  5. Your story sounds scary! I wonder what will happen next?

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