One evening Finlay wanted to watch a very scary movie, but his dad said that he would get too scared if he watched it. When his dad went to bed, he crept down the stairs and quietly switched on the TV.
The next day, Finlay went to the park with his two friends. Weirdly, the monster from the movie was a statue in the park. Finlay just ignored it and carried on playing. Suddenly, he felt something breathing on his neck. He turned around and saw the mutant chipmunk. He ran and hid behind a tree. The big mutant animal wanted to eat people...
Well done. A fantastic story all from the photo provided. It just goes to show that using 100 words or less can create a imaginative story like yours. I wouldn't want to see this scary mutant in my local park ;)
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It gave me the goose bumps.
ReplyDeleteHello Finlay; what a creepy story you have written for the 100WC. I wonder what happened next? Finishing with a cliff hanger is a wonderful idea as it leaves the reader wanting more. Keep on writing :)
ReplyDeleteI thought it was funny that you crept downstairs when your dad was in bed! Good imagination, keep writing.
ReplyDeleteWhat a scary story! Very well written. The way you have used punctuation is excellent.
ReplyDeletewell done you have put great senters in your story.I love it.
ReplyDeletei like your story finlay especially when you wrote when your dad went to bed and you crept downstairs and watched the scarry movie.
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