Thursday 20 September 2012

Mia's 5 Sentence Challenge

There are horse and carriages standing in the hot sun. Lovely purple and pink blossom is on the trees. Ladies are dressed in lovely white, blue and pink dresses. Horses are waiting in the sun to take people for rides. White fluffy clouds are in the blue sky.
Posted by at 11:55

13 comments:

  1. molly w20 September 2012 at 14:13

    Good work mia very good

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  2. Lily20 September 2012 at 14:14

    Hi mia, Ireally like your work. You should be given 100 house points.

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  3. wG20 September 2012 at 14:15

    well done mia keep the hard work up

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  4. ben m20 September 2012 at 14:20

    great work mia

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  5. isobel e20 September 2012 at 14:23

    Great work Mia i wish i can make sentences like yours

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  6. Emily20 September 2012 at 14:23

    Nice work Mia good remarry capiter letter.

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  7. nikola20 September 2012 at 14:23

    well done .you had lot of ful stops .I like your ajektiv

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  8. Sophie20 September 2012 at 14:26

    Well done, keep up the good work!

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  9. Charlie H20 September 2012 at 14:26

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  10. Charlie B20 September 2012 at 14:29

    Well done Mia, I really like your adjectives.

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  11. Charlie H20 September 2012 at 14:30

    hi mia your worck is good because you have used lots of adjectives.

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  12. Jodie P20 September 2012 at 16:17

    Fantastic work Mia. Keep it up.
    Miss Prophet (mum)

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  13. Finlay21 September 2012 at 17:19

    Well done great job see you on wednesday

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