Thursday 20 September 2012

Charlie H 5 Sentence Challenge

It is spring because there is blossom on the trees. The band is playing a tune. Is very warm, the ladies have got parasols. People are happily riding the horse and carriage in the park. Everyone is wearing old clothes.
Posted by at 11:48

22 comments:

  1. jamie20 September 2012 at 14:07

    hi charlie good work its really nice goodbye
    jamie

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  2. ben m20 September 2012 at 14:10

    well done charlie good sentence ben

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  3. ellie20 September 2012 at 14:12

    well done charlie great work :)

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  4. Leonie20 September 2012 at 14:13

    Hi Chariel i love your 5 sentences

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  5. LAUREN20 September 2012 at 14:13

    FANTASTIC WORK CHARLIE KEEP IT UP LAUREN

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  6. Eleanor20 September 2012 at 14:14

    Hi charlie good describing words and good punchuation as well Eleanor...

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  7. Adam w20 September 2012 at 14:14

    well don i like your story

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  8. Molly w20 September 2012 at 14:15

    Really good charlie good discribing words

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  9. mia p20 September 2012 at 14:15

    wel don is relly good

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  10. chelsea20 September 2012 at 14:17

    good wrok and nice wrok.

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    1. CHELSEA2 October 2012 at 16:30

      I LIKE YOUR SENTENCE AND GOOD describing words charlie well done

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  11. molly p20 September 2012 at 14:17

    hi charlie wow you have used great ajetivies I realy like your work

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  12. poppi a20 September 2012 at 14:17

    nice work is realy good

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  13. Leonie20 September 2012 at 14:17

    Hi Charlie great work

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  14. matthew h20 September 2012 at 14:20

    well done good work chalie

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  15. josh c20 September 2012 at 14:21

    hi charlie great sentences its great bye

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  16. Chloe20 September 2012 at 14:21

    Well done Charlie that work is great

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  17. clara20 September 2012 at 14:23

    well done .it is fab.

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  18. cerys20 September 2012 at 14:25

    wow i wish i was you becuse that was briliant mia welldone keep up the good work .was that hard work.

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  19. lucas20 September 2012 at 20:03

    bonjaur charlie au revoir.

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  20. Finlay21 September 2012 at 17:08

    Good sentences and interesting adjectives! Top writing!

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  21. CHELSEA2 October 2012 at 16:04

    i like your semtence they are vrey good describing word charlie and nice writing well done!

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