Clara's Imaginary World Story

Sophie's Imaginary World Story

Alfie's Imaginary World Story

5 Sentence Challenge

This week we will have a go at our own 5 Sentence Challenge. Can you use one of the pictures below to write 5 amazing sentences about the setting. Remember to think about the senses (what you can see, smell, touch, taste and hear) and to start your sentences in different ways using ISPACE.

100 Word Challenge - Week 5

We are returning to a normal prompt of part of a sentence. You can put it anywhere in your work as long as you keep it together. The prompt is:

 …the temperature dropped suddenly and…

You have 100 words to add to these 5 making 105 altogether.

QuadBlogging Week 3

This week, our focus blog is Miss Okell's Year 5 class at Plymouth Grove Primary School in Manchester. Please use the link on the right hand side of our blog or click on the link below to read their blog and leave comments for the children.

http://5o.plymouthgrove.net/

Star of the Week

This week's Star of the Week is Amelia! Well done Amelia, keep up the good work!

Leonie's 100 Word Challenge

One day I was playing in my garden, I was playing on my swing. I suddenly saw a squirrel, it started to grow into a huge sculpture. I felt scared. Then it started to move, it chased me all the way to the park. My heart was beating as fast as fast could be. My friends saw me running, but they couldn't see the beady eyed squirrel.
"What's the matter?" they said.
I was out of breath, "No time to talk, I am in great danger!"
"What? What do you mean?" they shouted, puzzled.
"What! You can't see what's chasing me? You must be blind!"

Amelia's 100 Word Challenge

One morning I was watching 'The Rat Movie 2.' It was voted outstanding by the public. Ok, really I was the only person in  town who had even bought the movie, let alone watch it!

The next day, I went to the park with my friends Chloe and Ebony. Our house is behind a dark, cold, black scrapyard. So, we went to the park around the corner to play football. A second later there was a loud and scary bang coming from behind me. An eagle flew across the sky. Everything went quiet and the sky turned black. Suddenly I felt like I was falling! I was! The giant rat had grabbed me...

Lily's 100 Word Challenge

I was running as fast as I could away from the meerkat monster. Only half an hour ago I was skipping happily through the park with my friends. That's when I first saw the monster! Then, when my best friends disappeared I ran for my life. The monster was chasing me.
"You will never escape from me!"
Now I was dodging through people and trees. A lady, who saw what was going on, rang the police. I knew if I could stay out of the meerkat's reach until the police arrived I would be safe. Luckily, the police were quick to surround and destroy the evil monster. I was safe!